雅思英语考试写作技巧之英语写作要诀
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雅思英语考试写作技巧之英语写作要诀
英语写作要诀
Agreement:主语和谓语在人称、数上的一致,关系代词与先行词的一致。
Ambiguity:尽量不去使用可能引起歧义的词语或句子。
Brief:文章“简为贵”,要抓住要点,简明扼要。
Coherence:文理通顺,前后连贯。
Development:主题的发挥应当充分、合理、正确。
Division:词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当,划分要清楚,避免使用重复字句和种子片段。
Figures:正确合理使用各类修辞格式。
Inflated diction:不使用做作的语言。
Key:用适当的关键词突出主题,每段都应有主题句。
Logical:内容要符合逻辑。
Message:信息要新鲜、确实、可信。
Omit:合理删除多余的'不必要部分。
Proposition:主张、观点、论述要清楚肯切、合情入理。
Punctuation:正确适时使用标点符号。
Relevant:文章一定要要题。
Sentence pattern:句型要尽量多样化。
Strait:开门见山,直来直去。
Style:文体恰切,适合内容要求。
Tense:动词时态要正确、一致、变化合理。
Theme:选题得当,主题突出。
谈句型的灵活运用
句子也是如此,我们提倡简炼,但不是说都用简单句。有人认为在写作考试中,采用简单句、短句、容易掌握,不在会出错,因而也最保险。这话没有错,但简单句用得太多,造成简单句的堆彻实际上是语言技巧不成熟、不老练,甚至语言水平低下的表现。在阅卷人员看来,同样的意思内容,一个考生能够运用比较复杂的句子结构来表达,其语言水平当然要比只会用简单句来表达的考生的语言水平高出一截,就是有点错也不妨碍他比后者取得较高的分数,因为他的难度系数要高。在某种意义上来说,在词数相同的作文中,语言水平越高,语言技巧越熟练,句子的数目也就越少。这就意味着句子长了,句子结构复杂了。
当然,我们反对过多地使用简单句并不是鼓励学生去刻意追求长句、复杂句。我们追求的是句子结构的多变。一篇文章能根据表达的内容使用不同的句子结构,会产生较好的艺术效果。
例子1 The Career I Pursue的主体段:
A variety of reasons have led me to choose this occupation over other more lucrative ones. First, teaching is learning. To make my lectures more interesting, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world-the very thing I like to do in my life. Second, teaching means freedom. As a teacher, I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me. Finally, I like teaching because it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catching a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, and no more worries about being laid off because you are getting old.
Agreement 主语和谓语在人称、数上一致,关系代词与先行词一致。
Ambiguity 尽量不去使用可能引起歧义词语或句子。
Brief 文章“简为贵”,要抓住要点,简明扼要。
Coherence 文理通顺,前后连贯。
Development 主题发挥应当充分、合理、正确。
Division 词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当,划分要清楚,避免使用重复字句和种子片段。
Figures 正确合理使用各类修辞格式。
Inflated diction 不使用做作语言。
Key 用适当关键词突出主题,每段都应有主题句。
Logical 内容要符合逻辑。
Message 信息要新鲜、确实、可信。
Omit 合理删除多余不必要部分。
Proposition 主张、观点、论述要清楚肯切、合情入理。
Punctuation 正确适时使用标点符号。
Relevant 文章一定要要题。
Sentence pattern 句型要尽量多样化。
Strait 开门见山,直来直去。
Style 文体恰切,适合内容要求。
Tense 动词时态要正确、一致、变化合理。
Theme 选题得当,主题突出
雅思英语考试写作题一览(1)
v104(.1.11中国大陆和悉尼2003.2.7 a类)
task1
是一个比较印度洋两国madagascar和mauritius相关数据的表格:
surface area(km2):前者比后者大很多
population(thousands):前者比后者大很多
gdp(us capita):前者比后者小很多
growth rate of population:前者比后者大很多
enrolment to school:分两项进行比较
primary前者97%左右,后者达到100%
secondary前者比后者小很多
结论:从这两国来看,人口越多的国家,生活水平相对低。
task2
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection is a waste of resource to what extent do you agree or disagree?
writing---v105 (a类2003.1.11台湾2003.1.25中国大陆)
task 1
关于四个国家政府在1990-1995见的花销的比较,四个pie chart
四个部分的花销:education defense health and other
其中肯尼亚和另一个国家(记不起名字了)较为相似,在教育上的花销较大而在defense上很小,与之相比较的是英国和美国,他们在教育上的'expenditure较小,而健康和defense上很大,四个国家的相同之处就是other占的比例最大,大约都在70%左右。
task2
Some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than the advantages, do you agree or disagree?
v106(a类荷兰2003.1.17和澳洲墨尔,悉尼卧龙,英2003.2.8 )
有两个版本1.是关于drug的. tobacco drug,然后说people has freedom to use it, but some people says that it should be illegal as other drugs.问你是agree or disagree?
2.Although it is freedom to ues tobacco while some people thing it should be made illegle as the same way as other drugs.to what extent do you agree or disagree?
v107 writing (马来西亚2003.1.18)
第一部分:
4幅图是关于巴西圣保罗和非洲某个国家某个城市的温度表和降水量表,
比较一下
第二部分:
是agree和disagree的问题
问高中毕业的学生是否应该在去大学前要工作或旅游一年
Some people believe that students who want to go to university after graduation from high school should have about one year's time to get a job to obtain work experience or have a travel to enlarge their vision. do you
雅思英语考试写作题一览(2)
v110
task1:小作文,bar charts啊,是说随着年龄的增长学习目的的.改变情况,青年人大都是为了career,老年人大都是为了interest,还有employer和年龄的关系。
task2: what is the reason for losing a variety of language and culture?
v111
An old topic, just about nature and nurture, which plays major role in personality and development.
小孩子的个性是后天培养还是先天生成的。
v112 (a类2003.1.18日高雄)
task1:
比较时4各国家在population,literacy与number of books published的数字
task2:
公司应该鼓励年纪已到55岁的高阶人员退休,insgroupsto give opportunities to new generation,赞成及反对的理由为何?
V113(2003.1.31悉尼uts )
task 1
You have to write a report for a university lecturer ; A chart shows the number of softwood and hardwood in new south wales, australia, from 1990 to ,
task 2:
Some people think that university should not provide theoretical knowledge, but to give practical training benefit to society.
do you agree or disagree.
use your own experience and knowledge to support your idea.
写作v115(a类中国大陆,auckland 2003.2.8日和新西兰2003.1.18日)
task 2:
some people think killing animals as food is cruel and unnecessary.
other people disagree because meat is essential to people.
discuss and give your opinion
v117 (2003.1.31英国)
task1是有2个charts,分析一下daily consumption of protein and calories in different regions of world。其中图表中的protein有列出是from meat还是other protein,而四个regionst分e是有north America, south American,Africa,and India,只有north America在两方面都超出了ideal intake standard。大概是这样吧。
task2,大概是说有人认为children要会competent, but others think that children should be taught to co-operate that become more useful adults. express some reasons of both views and give or own opinions...
You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Introduce yourself and tell her that you will be visiting her country during the summer vacation and suggest meeting her.(日常信)
亲爱的Sue:
你好吗?我从国际笔友那里获得的你的姓名和地址。很高兴给你写信并成为成为笔友。
Dear Sue,
How are you? I obtained your name and address from Pen Pal International. I am very glad to write to you and we become pen pals.
让我先介绍一下我自己:我目前在上海昂立托雅学院做英语(Q吧)教师。我1988年毕业于上海外国语大学,主修英语文学与语言学,并于获得了语用学硕士学位。我喜欢拉二胡(一种中国乐器)和听流行音乐。我还对旅行感兴趣。噢,对了,我喜欢泡酒吧。
Let me first introduce myself. I’m currently working as an English teacher at Shanghai Onlytoya College. I graduated from Shanghai Foreign Languages University in 1988, majoring in English literature and linguistics. I got my Master’s degree in pragmatics in 1998. I like playing erhu (a kind of Chinese musical instrument) and listening to pop music. I am also very interested in traveling. Oh, yes, I am a great bar-goer!
这个夏天我将去澳大利亚。我要代表我们学院参加7月10-16日在悉尼的一个会议。会后,我计划在澳大利亚观光游览一番,可能有5天多的时间。如果你有时间,我很想与你本人见一面,或许可以一起吃个午饭。
This summer, I will be traveling to Australia. I will be attending a conference on behalf of my college in Sydney from July 10 to 16. After the conference, I plan to do some sightseeing in Australia, maybe five more days. If you are free, I would be very happy to meet you in person. Perhaps we could have lunch together.
好了,我就写到这里吧。我已经迫不及待地在等你的第一封信了。请告诉我你的情况以及你有什么兴趣。希望我们可以成为好朋友。
你真诚的
Kenny Gao
Well, let me finish here. I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter. Please tell me all about yourself and your interests. I hope we can become good friends.
Yours truly,
Kenny Gao
Dear Jack,
Your suffering insomnia and dizziness gets me concerned. What is worse is that you have no solution to the trouble.t. As a result, it is recommended that you turn to Chinese medicine for an alternative.
As is popularly believed, Chinese medicine, in absence of side effects,contributes to more advantages over western medicine. In spite of the fact that it takes more time to work,a solid recovery will be accomlished. In addition, food treatmentis characteristic of Chinese medicine. Adjusting daily diet tends to lead to good health. Will you have a try?
Admittedly, cooperation with your doctor is badly needed if you adopt Chinese treatment. Only in this way will you be fine sooner than expected. Hope you will recover soon. I’ll help youin my power if you get me informed of your need.
Yours,
Lihua
作者|王贵友
公众号:贵友英语写作
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